Update on Falsification

Time for an update on "Falsification."
So far we are 6 1/2 scenes into the writing with 11 pages of script and 9 min. and 47 sec. worth of material written. We still have a long way to go as well...at the moment it looks like it should be between an hour and a full-length movie.
Here is an excerpt from the script:
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